Wednesday, December 04, 2019

FREE STORY! Trapped in Chastity by a Pretty Goth

Some hot kinky fantasy to drive out the winter weather. And, unlike the hero of the story, it's free!

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The cute goth sysadmin from the office has found the keys to uptight Michael's chastity cage. Now she makes him a very kinky offer he can't refuse (because, blackmail).


It's a bit of an experiment - I'm inviting people to post reviews suggesting what the hero should do next... (If you feel like doing that, please put them on Smashwords where other people can see them.)

6 comments:

peter.jones24 said...

Hi Giles! I love the new story and just left a comment on Smashwords. I'm not sure if I got all my feedback across accurately... there his limited space for comments... Please drop me a hint if you'd like me to explain my comments/ideas for the next part of the story. Thanks for sharing your work and reaching out to your fans!

Anonymous said...

Thanks for the story! Had to do some research on the Happy Chaste Boi - diabolical!
I think Michael will be doing whatever Gigi wants - and suffering mightily for it!
CK

Giles English said...

Thanks Peter - your review is visible on Smashwords!

CK - it would be a great help if you would do what Peter's done and post a review on Smashwords.

I'm waiting for more suggestions before I write the next part...

Giles English said...

The next episode is up on Smashwords!

peter.jones24 said...

Hi Giles, I immediately picked up the new chapter... and I have to say it‘s a love/hate one for me. The first encounter was very good - although as usual would have love to get a closer description e.g of her boots and her shoe cabinet, or her stockings. But the encounter itself was very erotic. I get what you wanted to to with the second encounter, also I didn‘t enjoy it (which was the goal, I guess). I would love to have a little more of Gigi at the end - and get a little more of her Goth style teasing... so, please, please, don‘t let us wait for another half year, Sir, until we get to read the next chapter! And again I‘d love to have a little more fetish description....

Giles English said...

Thanks Peter! Serials are hard to write - if the episodes need different flavours for variety, but the also need to be standalone, meaning the part may not reflect the whole. I'll try to keep the fetish aspects in mind when I write the next episode... might even jump back and pimp up this one at some point. Though I *like* all that fetish stuff, it's because of the effect, rather than specific buttons it pushes for me, so sometimes I skimp on description.

(As always, I'm grateful for reviews posted on Smashwords)