I have so many themes to explore, so many nuances of chastity and Femdom.
I also have a lot of half-finished pieces. Thanks to Kindle, I now have an impetus to polish them and get them out of the door.
Thanks for everybody's continuing friendship and support!
Giles
PS I have reopened the polls
PPS Feel free to make suggestions or requests :)
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Well my vote is for chastity planet. It just works really well as a background for a story about our little kink.
Agreed. Chastity Planet, or the Chayste series you had started
Thanks guys. The plan right now is to do several novellas over the next 12 months. Probably one of each setting and see which sells best on kindle.
What you're saying strongly suggests that my two SciFi ones should be good bets.
If you're still taking requests, I'd like to see more with the licking booths (from the early Chastity Planet stories), but more from a newcomer's perspective:
The Contest - While at a Femtopian club, two college students, a Free Neuter male and a lesbian, get into an argument over whether men or women are better at cunnilingus. Sensing possibility, the manager talks them into a competition in the licking booths . . . and they're just drunk enough to take her up on it. . .
As women line up, and the club gathers to watch, the two strip down and get locked in place. The novelty quickly wears off for the guy - midway through his second woman, he's about ready to forfeit. But as she gets up, he notices his crush is in the contest line . . . and all he has to do is get to her first . . . and thus dives into the sea of vaginas with renewed vigor . . .
Whether he pleasures his way to her on is somewhat irrelevant - as is the ultimate outcome. Some possible outcomes might be:
A) The lesbian gets so horny, she has to stop and pleasure herself. His tongue caressing his crush's clit, the Free Neuter feels his victory turn to ash as he hears the lesbian orgasm (loudly) - knowing that he can't do the same.
B)Winning the contest, the manager pulls him to his feet as the crowd cheers. But he doesn't feel a winner - he's naked, with semen dripping from his cup, and the vaginal fluids of dozens of women smeared across his face . . . and the crowd's mobbing him, so he can't clean up or get dressed
C)Another girl he knows settles into his seat. As he watches his crush go to the lesbian's booth, he now has to pleasure the girl who just cheated him out of the chance with his crush . . .
2)New Job - A college student, desperate for some quick cash, takes a part-time job working in a licking booth. As he's locked into place for the first time, he realizes he's in over his head . . . .
. . . which is quickly underscored when one of his female professors enters his booth. Out for some fun with her female friends, she's not about to back down. And so, not only does he have to pleasure his teacher (mature, but still pretty), he has to spend the rest of the semester in her class, knowing she's seen him working as little more than an oral sex slave. . .
There could also be some fun moments when his classmates find out about his new job . . .
Those are just two examples. Tom's adventures were good, but he was a little too experienced to convey the full impact of the licking booths.
I see what you mean. It's important to work out what's cool about the setting... :)
Thanks!
College guys (and girls) seem like a great way to play around with ideas, and show off the setting. "Young, dumb, and full of cum" - even before you throw in alcohol - could lead to a lot of fun scenarios. A drunk and disorderly conviction that leads to 200 hours community service and 2 weeks as a neuter. Signing up for an amatuer night competition in the licking booths at a college bar. Meeting her parents . . .
After all, its in no one's best interest (not the college, not the collegiate bars in Femtopia, no the tourist bureau) to have lots of college guys end up mutes, serving long sentences. But that just leaves them free to get into more trouble . . . I've known college guys, for example, who'd volunteer to be tied up nude like Miss Lang's bondsmen, competing to see who can talk a girl into taking him home first.
Other fun possibilities might be a "Fleet Week", or having several cruise ships come in at the same time. Businesses rushing to get their best reps to the docks, hordes of horny women overrunning everything, looking for a good time . . .
Oh, and if you're thinking of making Lewis into a jerk, or rebelling, it could be both amusing and educational to see him and Elizabeth commuting to Amazonia regularly. Experiencing time in an Amazonia style cup could be good for him
It's getting rather late, and I may not be 100% coherent right now. But it seems like there should also be potential in a more . . . college age, Tom-stye story. Senior guy who's been putting himself through college in the licking booths, finds out that a female classmate's never been to any of the Femtopia clubs, so he takes her along on his next shift and shows her around. And at some point, maybe after hours, she gets in the licking booth with him - "just to see what its like". It justifies exposition on the setting (as he plays tour guide) and a nervous first-timer girl is something we haven't seen yet.
And I seem to be hung up on the licking booths . . . not entirely sure why . . . Can we get some more "adult" entertainments from Femtopia? Surely the licking booths aren't the only fun-and-games there, and it'd be omething else to fixate on for a while . . .
And I'm calling it a night. Good luck
Have you given any thought to the Chastity Planet whippings? Will you be going with realistic/brutal: bowel-emptying, tongue swallowing, permanent scarring?
Or are you taking it in a more erotic/fantasy direction? Hot girls in dominatrix gear, neural induction whps, etc.?
And a story idea or two. So far, the Chastity Planet stories have revolved around guys on their first tours. But there's potential, too, in "retention". That is, in convincing the guys who've just completed their tours to sign up for another tour. Some possibilities include:
Professional Recruiters - After his tour's up, the guy presumably returns to the "Big O" station to get his cup & collar removed, and to ship out. But there's no reason for the Vestan colonies to just let their talented males leave. Presumably, they'd have recruiters on hand to sell the leaving males on re-upping for another tour.
If you're looking for a way to show the differences between the colonies, pit the Minervan, Femtopian, Amazonian, and Neutralian recruiters against each other for a particularly good departing male. The tactics they use, their sales pitch, and the "signing bonuses" they can offer would really flesh them out as cultures.
Last Chance A woman, upon finding out that Guy X is leaving, realizes she's actually in love with him. She follows him to the Big O in a desperate effort to convince him to come back to Vesta with her - even though it means another year in chastity.
The Return Or a guy could return after years of being away. Maybe he finds out his long-lost love is there, maybe he realizes he made a mistake leaving someone behind, maybe he's returning as a spy . . . But he's already been to Vesta, so his experiences would be different
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